Hi Gene:
Thanks for the comment and kind thoughts.
I honestly don't think my words offered any "wisdom". I enjoy expressing myself in writing, sometimes in verse. And the words arrived somewhere from the subconscious. They came into being because of what happened to me and who I was. I wrote for peace/catharsis and enjoyment.
I agreed that poker, as a game, resembles life the most, in comparison with other games. In fact, as I often tell my son, life is a game with rules. We may not like the rules but to be "successful" in life, we must follow the rules, one of which is the cardinal one:
I also agreed with your point about "embracing/surrending to" the moment instead of "seizing it". The notion sounded more romantic. Thus, I have revised that line. I also included the first part of the duet so the selected readers would follow the train of thoughts. A reader kindly suggested that I continue the poem after "One, two, three, I think I love thee."
Yes, moments are important and beautiful to me. I live mainly for the moments, for the exquisite sensations they bring.
A. One, two, three, I think I love thee
I don't know what's coming over me
I was drinking my usual evening cup of tea
In the balcony overlooking the rolling sea
Waves were pounding the beach
Palm trees were swaying with the breeze
Then all of a sudden twilight's dying lights
Made me realize thou art out of reach
But still, my thoughts march in lock step like enlistees
One, two, three, I think I love thee
Where art thou now? What thou art doing?
Dost thou ever think of me?
Dost thou hear the march of my soul?
The whispering whimpers of my heart's beatings
Wissai
July 12, 2013
B. YES, I do think of thee
YES, I do think of thee
Although I hardly know who thou art.
All we have are our hearts' occasional chimes
And long stretches of intervening time.
Yes, I sensed that thy warm smiles and sparkling eyes
Were trying to tell me something thou felt inside.
Yes, I do know time is running out on us.
Should we embrace our mutual feelings and make a fuss?
Should we answer to the call of our hearts
And make a brand-new start?
Honey, prithee, do tell me!
Wissai
July 13, 2013
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